Good communication is:
Foggy, indirect language is a symptom of hazy, incidental thought.
Remember, according to information theory (It did build the internet, it must make some sense), all communication has some level of noise. It is one of the reasons why all perception is a gamble.
Repeating a message reduces noise. It is hard to replicate something that is indirect and long.
If no one understands you, try shortening your message up and repeating it.